Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Storm

Why does Timothy have to die . He was the only one who had ever looked out for me. Who will be my eyes and ears. The hurricane was awful. In my mind during the hurricane my life flashed between my eyes the thought of having to be sucked in to the ocean was so terrible I can't even describe it. And I might never have the chance to ever see my mother ever again and what about Stew Cat who would look after him, poor stew cat. No I thought to my self I am going to hang on no matter if the hurricane throws a tsunami I WILL HOLD ON and i will survive if only poor Timothy could survive he would say d'adrages hurr'ican eh Phill-eep. And I would lough yeah Timothy it sure was old friend.

1 comment:

Mrs. Boyd said...

Excellent Anna!! I love how you added Timothy's accent at the end! Proof-read carefully - you have some small errors. Good job!

Con: 8/10 Strat: 9/10

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